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Campaign contributions: O'Quinn gives Bell a boost (Kelley Shannon, AP)

Buoyed by a big-dollar donor and a favorable debate performance, Democrat Chris Bell began airing more television ads today as he tried to surge through a new momentum in the Texas governor's race.

I really shouldn't be surprised any more by some of the truly bad copy turned out by professional writers AND editors in the field of journalism, but I am nonetheless.

Posted by Kevin Whited @ 10/10/06 23:00 | Media Matters | Technorati

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I need to find a momentum I can surge through.
Posted by (momentum-less) Anne @ 06:15 on 10/11/06


The WSJ print edition had a HEADLINE yesterday about employees being LAYED OFF. I haven't yet recovered.
Posted by Cathy @ 11:26 on 10/11/06


The momentum I have is still good for another few months before I need some new momentum.
Posted by another precinct chair @ 11:27 on 10/11/06


Surge through a new momentum?

I wonder how that can even be written, unless there was a misunderstood unclarity of word meanings.

(That was purposeful.)

PS: I haven't been back to your blog for too long. It's shameful, really. I always enjoyed your danger train posts... I'll do better.
Posted by Julie @ 22:50 on 10/15/06


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